This is the kind of sneak peeks to have for an up coming cartoon - no gags given away. Animatics are for nerds and whores . Pencil tests are for the suave and debonair.
P.s. The whole thing is a rip-off of Howard the Duck. Verbatim.
Sweet man - the broken arm works really well. The only crit I have is that front leg contact drawing where his head comes down and back catches my eye because it seems off of the arc. The change in line weights is also a little distracting but we all know that's because Flash doesn't understand the idea of a stable brush size.
nice job ryan. i would suggest fluffing out the hair a bit more, but everything else is consistent. glad to see you giving us little animated updates, hope to see more; even if they are rough. :)
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Not half bad... how much longer do we have to wait?
This is the kind of sneak peeks to have for an up coming cartoon - no gags given away. Animatics are for nerds and whores . Pencil tests are for the suave and debonair.
P.s. The whole thing is a rip-off of Howard the Duck. Verbatim.
I think it's scissoring a bit.Just need to change one half of the run slightly.
Sweet man - the broken arm works really well. The only crit I have is that front leg contact drawing where his head comes down and back catches my eye because it seems off of the arc. The change in line weights is also a little distracting but we all know that's because Flash doesn't understand the idea of a stable brush size.
Thanks for the crits, guys. I really appreciate them because it made me re-analyze the cycle more.
I adjusted some key frames (scooting some left & some right) and now I think it runs much smoother.
"how much longer do we have to wait?"
^^^
nice job ryan.
i would suggest fluffing out the hair a bit more, but everything else is consistent. glad to see you giving us little animated updates, hope to see more; even if they are rough. :)
nice job ryan.
thanks!
i would suggest fluffing out the hair a bit more
excellent suggestion.
glad to see you giving us little animated updates
awesome, there'll be more!
After you finish this, be sure to finish your Bird Skipper cartoon.
great job Ryan!
Keep'em coming.
What a hep of shit!
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